My brain spins round and round again. The rest of your kind up above. I slowly drift up above the clouds where the lives of everyone on earth fall into the hands of you. You helped create the place we live in, so it is only you to blame. We need you here, to stay. You’re the one who good people go to. Even on bad days. You’re the one we all rely on to make us happy always. You have the name angle to protect the world beneath you. I didn’t realise they could fly. Until I met you.

I was watching it, making sure my eyes didn’t move a wink. Right behind me I feel a breath on my neck, I shiver, I feel as if I am being watched. I turn and look back. But there was nothing there. I tried to avoid to look at that same spot but I felt like it was trying to tell me something. I just didn’t know what. I start to feel dizzy, I fall straight to the ground. I see that same image in my mind over and over again. My eyes never opened since.

I turned around looking over my shoulder I see the bones of a seahorse wondering where it had adventured its whole life. I smell the sea drifting back and forth, back and forth. My parents had told me it was time to leave Africa, go to a safer country, they were right. As we arrive to the airport I watch all the planes take off, one by one disappearing into the clouds. I wonder what it would be like in a different country would there be purple elephants? My mother comes and brings me a ripe avocado before we leave.

It was finally the day, my 12^th birthday. I had been waiting for that day for what seemed like ever. My mum told me when it was my 12^th birthday I could buy my first set of makeup. I was extremely excited, who wouldn’t?! We were on our way to the city when I had seen the weirdest thing I have seen in a long time they were massive, dull and very odd. “Whatever has happened,” Cries my mother. I seemed to have no clue. Crowds of people had swarmed up to where we were. Mystery had struck my mind.

Dear Emily,
I really loved your story. I liked how you used all the traits of a great writer. I think you could improve on describing what Lara was like. Other than that your story was great!
From Bella.

Dear Audrey,
I loved your story so much! It used the perfect amount of description. I think that you need to work on use a bit more show not tell in your story. It was amazing though! From Bella

Dear Amelia,
I really liked your post. I think you could describe and explain your words a bit better.
From Bella

Dear Sophie,
Your post was so descriptive. I absolutely loved how you used the cliffhanger in your story. I think you could have worked on using more of the writers traits.
From Bella

 

It was a beautiful sunny day and I was outdoors reading my book whilst my mother was gardening. After I had finally finished my book I wandered into the kitchen following the most gorgeous smell I have ever smelled in a long time. My father had told me to go set the table, as I was setting it I saw extremely unusual object on it. Mother had come into the room and wondered aloud why was that hat on the table? It looked a lot like a top hat but it was a very odd greenish colour mixed with blue.

I ran, jumped, got all tangled up all because of… well I don’t actually know what it was so I improvised a little. She jumped through the portal leaving our world as we know it. Spinning, hurdling down far, far beneath the core of the universe. Okay my teacher says, keep going you’re doing great. I took her words into consideration so it ended up to be a great story. Anyway back to the text now. I finally reached the bottom of the portal I jumped out and screamed, millions of dead creatures’ right in front of my own eyes.

Cape Bridge water Coastal camp review

I deeply recommend Cape Bridge water coastal camp because it has amazing food, even better accommodation and incredible scenery. The cabins were so cool and spending time in there is a great space to get to know other people a lot better. The scenery walks were so fun, we could see the beach from really high up. The tours of the land and sea were amazing, we could see great views and lovely sea animals like Seals, fish etc. The activities were defiantly my favourite part of this camp. There was a massive variety of activities such as, snorkelling with the seals, seal tours, ab sailing, surfing, and Geo cashing, beach activities, sand boarding and caving . Overall this was the best camp I have been too.

Okay, okay just let me explain, it was an accident…

I’ve got to be honest I totally blew it, how am I going to tell mum? I know I’ll just blame it on Posie, she won’t mind, right? It doesn’t sound that fair, I know but I doubt you have heard of the story when she betrayed me as well, ok, it was a perfectly ordinary day in our house until I walked in my room, see my sister and scream at her. She broke my computer, I was so cross that I walked into her room broke hers too.

T’was a cold winters day, we stroll calmly down the pavement as my neighbour calls out to me, I wonder what it is this time. He just stares at me and says “Hey girl move out the way, your blocking my view of a red door” But I just put that behind me, anyway I went back home just and the sun started sinking, it was beautiful. I saw a few coins next to my mother’s bathroom as well as a silver ladder. I went over to them and for some reason just stared at them until I felt sleepy.